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Do you see the robot's right arm?

I curse this .25 mm line width micron pen for screwing up on me as I tried to ink that arm.

But otherwise, I'm amazed with how that last panel turned out.


If anyone notices anything in this that could be improved, please say so - I'd prefer it.

EDIT: I stare at this, and I wonder if the 'CRASH' sound effect should've gone over on the left side of those two panels...
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this is really good...like better than I've seen from you. 'Course my memory is shit and I don't remember when I've last seen your work...
Even tho this is really good I think you should try adding a grey shade. Not like screentone or anything, just one grey color that you add as a flat tone to help emphasize certain areas/figures, add more depth and push back the bkg while pushing forward the figures, etc....
Doesn't have to be like fill bucket...but maybe like cel shading? Either through photoshop or a ink or watercolor wash....dependings on preferance.
wow, this comment is like a month and a half late...
it's so sad how I don't get to go on the computer anymore....